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That's funny lol. So I'm pretty sure I've finished everything available, and gotta say it's a good foundation. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. It's really nice not having the dumb forced trope of "I can't tell anyone my secret" when it really would just help them understand. Well written, there. There are a few spots here and there that need some proof reading, I sadly didn't think about it to take a screen shot, but I noticed only a couple times that something was misspelled or worded improperly. Which is already a good sign tbh if it only happened so few times. The writing overall could use some cleaning up, like you don't need to reconfirm something 3 different ways before finally continuing the scene. The very loose paraphrased example would be Aveline leading MC somewhere and it's like "alright, time to set off" "OK, I will follow you" "good, let's go" which was directly after she said she would happily guide him etc. It's definitely not worded exactly like that, but it's basically that. And it is the earliest example I can pull off the top of my head.

All in all though, I honestly look forward to more.