At first, there were a LOT of typos, so it was hard to tell what things were being intended, like the Pary instead of Pray. But as the game went along, they seemed to clean up quite a bit. As for the story, the background lore was really nicely done. I enjoyed the diary entries, even if I didn't read them all, but I found the ending to be a little confusing, and wasn't sure what exactly was happening. Also, the random battles were a little annoying the further you got into the game, as they were less a way of getting cash and more just in my way as I tried to advance the story.
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Thanks for playing my first ever game! I'm happy to hear that you like the background lore. I also understand that ending was confusing, not putting in why the Priestess of the Deep One was in Tidecrest made the ending not land. Thanks again for playing. I had a lot of fun making this game and I learned so much. I can't wait to do it again.