this was really cool and very sweet! i loved how much each character's room said about them and the contrast in how differently they perceived the same moments. Mello's story was my favourite :)
my main note is that some of the transitions between paragraphs/thoughts were missing -- i'm wondering if maybe your ink was accidentally skipping sections? (i had some trouble understanding that Steevie and Mello joined Sam and Charlie at their table in the coffee shop. there's also a few moments at the party where it felt like i missed something.)