Good luck with this game. It looks as promising as usual. I've just had a brief play at the first part of the English version, and here's a little bit of feedback based on that initial try. Mostly I've just found some trivial typos, but the last point is about an important apparent bug:
1. "Physical" should be spelt with a "y" in it, not an "i" (title screen).
2. "Teclado" should be "Keyboard" in the initial control choice. (And since you say "Sinclair Joystick" in this choice, I think you should also say "Kempston Joystick", not just "Kempston".)
3. If I examine the workbook and the comic, and work my way through the motorcycle race, then whenever I make a bad choice, there's a faulty character in the failure message. Where it says "I don't remember having drawn it like that", there's an unwanted character after "that", before the full-stop. It looks like it's probably an "í" (acute-accented i).
4. *** BUG1 *** After working through the motorcycle race in the comic, if I then choose the "I order a cup of coffee" option, and follow it with the "Inventory" option, I just end up with a completely blank black screen, and nothing else happens.
I'm sure there will be other little problems to find, but that's as far as I've got. Overall, the quality of the English translation seems very good so far.
Hello Richard, thank you very much for playing and for your comments. They help me a lot. Thanks to you, I have already corrected the two typos. It is important to take care of the language and although my language is Spanish, I really like English, and I also love English history.
And about the inventory error it is also fixed. There was a memory limit problem, the English version takes up a little more and the game is at its limit. Although I think it's all good, I don't know if it could fail anywhere else. Please let me know, I have uploaded the corrected file.
Thank you so much!