(I also have a non-commentary one I guess, if my voice is very cursed.)
For a putting yourself to challenge to make a game, this is still pretty good! Best is the music and the graphics, and Sona as well! Such an adorable and charming character! I love them! (< will actually want to draw them.... later sadly, still had something to finish). The lore and story, might be minimalistic, but still so pretty good. Also the events are pretty cool too and varied. I guess the only complain I will have, will be tied to the endings I guess. I still dunno how the last major choices trigger, even with all the replaying at times. Nevertheless about the issue, I had so much fun.
Thank you for a cool game! As for first game, it's pretty good!