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it's interesting, I like how you are attempting to make an rpg with the renpy, this is the third one that comes to mind that attempted this the others being "town of magic" and "double perception". the skills don't get learned in this version, there is not really a way to earn gold only the 300 from the quest to kill harpies and even then you have to pay 50 gold to get it, it bothers me that just drawing a map in a school attracts attention although I do understand wanting to apply some agency to the player but you already set a hard time limit of 20 days and if it was a set up to the big bad of the story there is enough with the missing poster the lack of depiction for normal people makes those that do have one stick out. Nora kind of annoys me as a hinderance in the beginning although I found her tail cute. the equipment needs work says headband gives ten power but it didn't reflect it in the stats and for some reason people like to wear a corset on their head. the warewolf at the beginning also triggers and error message with one of his attacks. I did like how choices do matter like with lucy's introduction, and the plot is unique enough that I am curious how it unfolds. I think you might have lacked motivation since this hasn't gained steam yet since the other version was released last year but I'm kind of a fan so far.