I really enjoyed your game for last year's yuri jam and this feels like a natural evolution of it, and of you as a writer and game-maker! From the start I had a rough idea of where this would go, but it was a painful trip I was happy to take, and I love Maca and Lyra so much! I would totally fall for Lyra too, I can't blame the little critter, and though I got the 'good' ending all of them were very emotional.
Great job!