I love stories that explore Marisa's drive to do what she does. It tends to be really easy to resonate with. And I really liked these interpretations of Alice and Patchy and what could potentially drive them as well. Good stuff.
Minor thing: The mini-portraits in the UI for Patchy and Alice don't change expression alongside the main portrait. (But Marisa and Reimu's mini-portraits work fine.) Even once I noticed, I still sometimes was only looking at the mini-portraits/UI to focus on reading, so I probably missed some expressions.