Great game (to the creator, I wish I could say directly to them), and I think you nailed the translation, and I guess, captured the writing flavor the creator had in mind, despite some small flaws, as well. Do you have any plans for their other games to be translated?
Thanks for the comment and the video! I really believed in the story and wanted to do the translation justice, so I worked on it while asking questions to the creator about plot and whatnot to make sure I wasn't interpreting something wrong. I'm glad to see that it paid off! For the moment, I'm working on another game translation by another creator for Steam release, but I'm definitely open to looking at this creator's other works in the future, and I've let them know that, too! I'm also gonna go back and edit my profile to list any other games I've translated and will keep on updating it as they come out (a lot of them probably won't be released on itch.io), so you can always keep an eye there just in case so you don't miss anything!
Oh wow, I wasn't expecting you to have checked out another translated game of mine! That one was the first game I translated, and as such, I imagine it has way more flaws than this one lol. But the same creator is coming out with a kind of sequel for that game which I'm also doing the translation for, and the Steam link for that is also on my profile!