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I really like the foreshadowing and how there's some slightly "off" moments

-Inspecting the star present tells you Lambchop gave it to her because he wanted Stella to think about him, which is not really supposed to be the reason you give a gift to someone.

-Lambchop's name is weird. Everyone else has fairly cute names, or at least names with no gorey connotations, but Lambchop instantly makes you think of axes, chopping, and slaughterhouses. However when I saw him I sort of just brushed it off as it being a species name.

-The venus flytrap was cool foreshadowing. Because when I first saw it I thought "that's a little strange how there's a carnivorous plant in such a cutesy setting, but I guess Lambchop just has a cool plant" but at the end it gained a totally new meaning.

When I think about it I fell like it should have been totally obvious to me Lambchop was going to be the main antagonist and the culprit behind the picnic incident, but when I was actually playing it wasn't, which I think is exactly what good foreshadowing does.

-Stella saying "this isn't that kind of story" when healing the beheaded person (forgot their name ;-;), and then Lambchop later accusing her of making everything how she wants it to be with no regard for anyone else. "This isn't that kind of story." is now Stella upset that things aren't like how she wanted it and her fixing the world so that it matches her vision.

-Acorn telling Stella she's "everyone's favourite person" was another odd moment later contextualised as Stella making the whole world and everyone in it about her.

And it always feels really weird how she doesn't address what happened at all and chooses to keeps everyone in ignorance, to the point that she makes Ruuuby completely forget all the bad parts of last night.

Ruuuby being a wolf, yet dressed in Little Red Riding Hood's clothes and having Red's character (association with baskets). Lambchop lamenting that Ruuuby is a predator yet "indistinguishable from any prey animal." Ruuuby said the meat Lambchop force-fed her tasted good. Would she rather eat meat than the baked treats she makes?

The Little Red stuff was a really clever way to show that perhaps Ruuuby is playing a part she wasn't made for and didn't truly choose.

This comment is so long xD, just wanted to say I think your game is so interesting and so well made.