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I see so many parallels with her and the huntress, strong compent woman that are able to stand up to a Dragon. To me after you take her pack and of course have you way with her in the furst scene an exile or banished from the pack.

Wolves are pack creatures and lone wolves do have it tough. I can see her having problems hunting and feeding herself not because she can't but because she is waay to used to have the pact at her command. The second thing that is already part of her story is her going into heat. I'm not sure there are many other packs out their so she would end up on the outskirts of her former pack. Here could be a check for if the Wolfpack has high moral. If they have low moral 1you probably would not see her again, if they are high moral and thusly "well fed" She could be dumped back into your dungeon.

She believes your a sun cursed wyrm guided by your dick. So seeing her former pack prosperous and her notions of you challenged (not keeping her as a sex toy) she might be willing to regain some of her position by becoming your consort.

FrogW4 days ago

I agree with several points of your opinion, I think this comparison between Caçadora and Naho is wrong

the hunter has suffered several defeats in the past, her spirit is destroyed, she does not fight for her own good, but for the will of others. She is not proud of her sole purpose which is to be a tyrant's weapon, she only joins the protagonist when he proves to be a good leader and kills herself when she sees him as another monstrous tyrant.

Naho was never defeated and many tried to overthrow her and take control of the pack, she always fought for herself, she was always above everyone, the strongest warrior among all wolves, within a group that values strength above all else. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . , her pride is monstrous, then a dragon came and she lost everything.

The huntress has already lost everything, she has nothing left to lose by joining the Dragon, he is trying to recover some of what was taken from her by her ancestors the ancient Dragons, she sees the current Dragon as something to give purpose to her life which has always been without purpose.

Naho had all the strength and respect of his race and lost it all overnight. The Dragon is an obstacle. The only way to recover everything you lost is to overcome this obstacle. Imagine how humiliating it would be to become the consort of the being who destroyed your life, and the pack would never accept her, she would be a submissive coward.

As much as I like Naho, it's a difficult puzzle to convincingly cast her as a consort.

Denthris3 days ago

Their still is paralells between the Huntress and Naho. They both are willing to fight the Dragon. The both Hate the Dragon simply for being a Dragon. The Huntress obviously has reason to hate him. Nahoo only hates him because of the Moon/Sun religion that is never really explained as far as I've gotten.

This Parralel is reinforced by the writers, when Naho tries to kill you with the Assassin's blades if you. No they are not the same character, they each have their own stories and I'm not saying they are identical. Just because they are two of them that are "strong" female characters.

The biggest thing with the Huntress is that you get a CHANCE to prove your not who she thinks you are. And you have to prove you are not Cruel.

Nahoo thinks your a Sun Cursed Wyrm driven by your Dick. And you get nothing plot wise to change her opinion. The only options you get are how to Rape her.

I agree, I don't think their is anything you can do to her in prison that would make her submit.

That is why I think you going to need a "Charm" option as well. Like you get the Option with the Huntress. You need an option to Not treat her like a sex toy.

Currently Naho writing feels unfinished. Their is a scene between Nahoo and Issa where Isa poison Nahoo and instructs her to behave. - Nothing comes of it.

Naho also has another scene, when she is in heat and you choose to take her, she somehow gets the advantage and then rides you. This does suggest how near impossible it is for Nahoo to resist this urge as one of her instincts. As Naho in ever other mood, would and should use the chance to press the attack.

And again their is no follow up. Both scenes seems to be completely forgotten.

Also if you choose to take her Anally, she also cries for mercy and claims she submits... Again another scene that seems to be forgotten after it happens, as at that point all her scenes simply repeat.

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