+ Great core concept
+ Presence section does exactly what it's meant to, spark ideas as to how you might introduce a threat besides just plonking them down into the world. The idea of an old rusty harpoon slamming into your deck with a challenge attached, launched from a still-unseen vessel while the wind carries a hint of lavender, is very cool.
+ 'Pipe Organ Mortars' also has some great imagery
+ 'A Curse on Cowards' is a brilliant quirk