Some parts felt a bit too long. Also, I'm pretty sure the wrong sprites were used a few times (for example, they wake up from bed in their space suit for some reason)
But the story is interesting to read through, I had a good time!
You're absolutely right : D
I saved all my coding for the last 30 hours, and caught the wrong outfit in the scene before just before submitting in the locker room, but forgot to update that one! I'll make sure to fix it in January. Thanks for reporting it!
I also agree that I deviated a bit too much from the core of my story, so the pacing is a bit lopsided at times. I'll be the first to admit that writing is not my strongsuit, but hopefully it will improve with experience.
I'm glad you enjoyed the concept at least; the original idea was a polar bear who mysteriously finds himself lost in the Antarctic with only an angry penguin to lead him home, but I thought that idea was too obvious.
Thanks for the read!