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An interesting read! The idea of soulmates is well explored, with the pros and the cons. The writing is engaging and the characters are realistic. The visual presentation works really well, and the music fits nicely too. Overall, one of my favorites in the jam.

That was quite a nice read. There’s quite a few grammar mistakes and weird expressions, but as a french guy, I got where they come from. They don’t impact the reading experience much anyway. The sprites are really cute.^^ The second ending kind of feels tacked on, and the music accompanying the last sequence makes it sound so sad.

A really good story with great presentation. The visual part of “visual novel” really shines through.

Thanks for reading! The dad’s mission is a bit of a backdrop here, but the bigger VN I’ve been working on for a few months takes place in the same universe and focuses on that point (with different characters, to be clear). Here’s a list of endings for curious people.

The hidden ending didn't work on version 1.0 but does in 1.1. Here's a hint if you want it.

Interesting premise but it's a bit weird to talk about real dates and events and then have a fictional language and countries.

That story by itself definitely feels incomplete. I can feel the choices waiting to be implemented.

I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of this.

The black sprites with higlighted hair look cool, but it's a bit distracting that all the girls look the same.

The story really didn't go where I expected it too, in a good way.

The transformation stuff seems a bit tacked on since it's not really resolved. The rest of the story is fun to read through. I liked the way Wes rambled to himself.^^

There's that turn of phrase where you tack on the double negatives formally incorrectly.

How could I not tell him no?
How could I not turn down an offer like this?
How could I seriously NOT pass this up?

Some parts felt a bit too long. Also, I'm pretty sure the wrong sprites were used a few times (for example, they wake up from bed in their space suit for some reason)
But the story is interesting to read through, I had a good time!

I really like it so far! I'll eagerly await the follow-up!^^

That was great. The way the perspective shifts is really clever and interesting. The story also felt just as long as it needed to be, great pacing.

Oof, that was sad. I loved it though, really well done.

I was quite invested in the story, but the end was really abrupt there.

The normal story is nice, but the fourth-wall breaking part really surprised me. I feel bad for "Me", now.

It was fun but a bit weird. The rivalry between Dominik and Martin was shown really well. Martin's rings were hidden by the text box, that wasn't great.^^