The game is sexy, entertaining and fun. The artstyle is cute and very likeable. There are still some typos but that's not really an issue. I really enjoyed the demo and totally agree that this game looks very promising.
The only issue I personally have is the very pixelated look. Like I said, the artstyle in general is very charming and enjoyable, it's just those super pixelated lines that kinda hurt the eye. I don't know if this is an artistic decision or has technical reasons but I feel a bit sad for the otherwise gorgeous artstyle.
Robin Morningwood Adventure (sadly) also has these pixelated lines but thankfully a bit less extreme.
Clear sharp (unpixelated) lines are sexy! And they would suit the toony and charming artstyle of your games so much better imo.