The writing in this VN was wonderful, probably the best from what I've read so far! The way you described the scenes really helped draw me in, especially the first flashback, with the bridge and the stream. It's a little hard to describe, but it felt really nostalgic?
The music and ambiance worked well with the story, though the looping and cut offs between scenes were a bit jarring.
I hope you consider continuing the story in the future, I'd love to read more about what happened between Victor and Caden!