Thanks!
There are a number of things I didn't get a chance to implement yet, like scenes displayed on the screen, a couple of backgrounds, and a couple extra sprite expressions beyond the default ones, so hopefully I can inprove it a bit.
I experimented with altering the text speed for the first time, so I was curious if it was for the better or worse, so I will keep that in mind for when I release a new build, hopefully in January. I wanted to try and release the full story, even if I didn't get to fully polish it.
Thanks for taking time to leave a review. I appreciate the feedback!