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If I could define the experience I had with this VN it would be 3 words: I loved it.

The way you describe the story and the interaction with each character is very entertaining!

I would say that it is one of the few VNs that makes me feel that way, it's like I was watching an animated television series when I was a child.

I also liked the scenarios and GUI's, it seems that there has been an improvement in quality than your other VN which is worth admiring.

The only thing that could be negative would be certain transitions in the dialogues, since there are certain pauses in each part of the dialogue that makes it a little difficult to read for me (since I had to increase the speed of the text to be able to read the dialogues complete)

That would be my entire rating on this VN, it turned out excellent!

P.S. The video of the intro when you start the game made me laugh a little. I think it was because it caught me off guard 😂

Thanks!  

There are a number of things I didn't get a chance to implement yet, like scenes displayed on the screen, a couple of backgrounds, and a couple extra sprite expressions beyond the default ones, so hopefully I can inprove it a bit.

I experimented with altering the text speed for the first time, so I was curious if it was for the better or worse, so I will keep that in mind for when I release a new build, hopefully in January.  I wanted to try and release the full story, even if I didn't get to fully polish it.

Thanks for taking time to leave a review.  I appreciate the feedback!

Oh, side note on the intro... it's kind of an inside joke on the fvn server.  Unagi had a fursona pic drawn of me as an art trade for some artwork I did for him.  He told the artist to draw me as Sonic the Hedgehog, because I tend to get things done quickly.  They drew the intro pause for Sonic 1, so I spoofed the Sega logo intro 😁

(artwork by January Bridges)

I hope I sang the harmony close enough to the original! 😆


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Oh I understand!

I had seen that video before but I was surprised that you used it in your VN.

But hey, it was a good start for a game ;)