The game seems to have a premise about transsexuality.
A representation of self-acceptance and your likes.
Although the game tries to do this along with references to politics I feel that the execution is not that good.
I wouldn't be able to give some suggestions on how to improve or expand it since it's the first time I play a visual novel related to this theme, perhaps it could focus on better interaction or a broader self-discovery not only of the protagonist, but also of the character that accompanies him.
Finally, it would be to improve the grammar and make a few corrections to the text.
But still great game, but it can improve as I said.