I loved this game so much. Each character's writing is unique and each of their personalities and quirks immediately immersed me and made me want to play the game through till completion.
The character's unique writing styles also work fantastically to distinguish them from one another which makes the gameplay function of spotting the fakes work well.
I thoroughly enjoyed the art style and the bad ending gave me a genuine jumpscare due to the art and sound working so well together!
Regarding constructive criticism, it would be great to see a button to start the game on specific days or restart the game from Day 8 if you get a bad ending. I spent a long time skipping through the 8 days several times because I kept getting the bad ending and desperately wanted to know who the kidnapper was and the location! Unfortunately, I ended up having to give up because the skipping got tiresome.
It would also be nice to have a sticky note on the desk somewhere with the Boss's number as I wanted to phone him on Day 1 to see if there was extra dialogue but completely forgot the number he said during the first phone call.
I also encountered two gameplay bugs. 1 where the 14th and 11th map locations didn't allow me to use the sticky note or trash button when I was playing in full-screen mode (from a browser). The other issue I encountered was that if I wrote too much in the notebook and text went off the end of the page, that text was gone if I tried to backspace to get it back.
I'd also love to still be able to see each map location number once I place a sticky note on it. The sticky note currently blocks a lot of the numbers which made it difficult to figure out what the location was without deleting my note.
Overall, an extremely well-thought-through game that I honestly would have been happy to purchase and play on Steam for £5-£10. I hope you decide to update it in the future to perhaps make re-doing the ending easier as I would love to replay and finally get the good ending! :)