I'm sure we have a lot of errors in the game for other languages it's really difficult to tell since the team only speaks English. Hopefully it won't detract too much from the experience.
Was just to mention if you make the full release. Otherwise i finished the first department and it is a great game with a good mix of a VN and Candy Crush. Only thing that was annoying was that you cannot use an auto function in the VN-Parts and only press yourself each text or skip all. Maybe include something like this as a 4th option.