Hey dinsaphir, I will check your ploished version out.
similar to you I I have adressed alot of the concerns and suggestions I got through the very kind and helpful feedback! :)
here is the post jam patch: https://fedboi.itch.io/whiterectangle
Edit: I posted a devlog about the patch: https://fedboi.itch.io/whiterectangle/devlog/121426/post-jam-patch-thanks-for-the-4th-place