Thank you for your time and feedback! I agree that our characters and plot sequences could have been more fleshed out. Not only our backstory/history, but our character’s current motivations as well. I think our development moved forward at inappropriate times, altering the tone and direction of the game before fully settling down on something coherent. This is also apparent with mixed tones in texts. We will try to find a consistent path to follow as we go back over what we have so far. Thank you again for your review ^^