I just realized I forgot to respond to this Σ(っ °Д °;)っ
I look forward to an expansion of this story ;-; I'll hold out hope that it has a relatively happy ending for all of them.
(xD Since you and a few other folks said it sounded fine, I tried not to let my voice bother me. I'll probably leave it as is)
Ooh 👀 I'm definitely excited to see how the story differs!