The way this story starts is pretty good, but feels rushed and incomplete by the end.
SPOILERS BELOW
The premise is good!
Someone finds pictures of a childhood friend, and reminisces of their friendship and falling off.
The writing in the first memory is the best part.
A story of two children who like doing things together. Their dialogue feels natural, and the pacing is good!
The last memory feels rushed, the way the children talk feels off.
For example, Victor mentioning a company by name and mentions an accident about it, and then drops it.
Then their argument feels like it comes too fast.
And then it just ends. Like I feel there was something intended to be added here, but it was cut.
So in general, the start is good, and the general idea of the story works. But I feel this suffered from the time limit.
I believe some extra polishing would improve the story