Hi! I finally had the time to play this game and can I just say you did an amazing job! I could tell you put a lot of work into it, and it was really fun to see the bits and pieces you've mentioned working on in the past few weeks get implemented into the game :-D! The Mychael plushie was a lovely surprise, I didn't expect to see him there haha!
I loved the intro sequence during the bus ride, where we get to see MC's inner thoughts and see a bit of their personality. The subtle worldbuilding is a nice touch too (camera lenses in your eyes?? hello???) and once we enter the mountains I was really immersed in the writing with mentions of magic and monsters. MC really was having the worst day of their life, R.I.P.
Corvin definitely feels complex to me; he's quick to react and doesn't try to hold back from expressing himself, which is refreshing in my opinion. I'm wondering if there's a bigger rivalry going on between him and the wolves (a wolfman??? maybe?? there's mentions of a second love interest hehe).
Admittedly I recognize some familiar story beats but! I can't wait to see how you continue the story with your own personal twist! Congratulations on getting it out, I look forward to seeing how the story progresses from here :-D