The style of narration here feels so dry and rotten in a good way, truly like the mind of someone like Bishop. Kind of like tumbling rocks. I enjoyed your descriptions a lot, you really know how to paint a horrible picture and make me feel like shit reading it.
Again, in a good way. This was raw and heart-wrenching and I loved it. The descriptions of the state of the angel girl made me wince every time.
Great work!