Thank you for making this beautiful VN! Holy fuck, with like a few hundred CGs, vocal tracks (are songs made for the game too, btw?), it's like watching an anime, but better (i am more into VNs :D), it must be a labor of love!
I am now regretting i grabbed it just at min price, but i'll do my best to spread a word! Btw, my suggestion: make a Demo please! It will make more people try the game.
Spotted a few minor mistakes here and there, but nothing too serious:
- "phoenix part i can't believe" (should be "can"?)
- "and you're... a pervert." (says Hibiki instead of Wendy)
- "What the hell do you two think" (same)
- "The plane crash, her arrival at the temple" (what plane crash? :D)
- "Oh, I don;t think so"
- styled font doesn't have some glyphs (like, Māui displayed as M▯ui for me)
I like occasional use of Japanese words, it is cute
I'm just a little sad that they never said "I love you" at the end in this part, that keeps my heart from feeling full, but other than that it was perfect! :D