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okay I just spent two days reading this and I’m blown away. I love the concept so much??? The world you built feels incredibly alive, I really did feel like I was actually there while reading. I love the insane amount of variations you’re doing with the flirting choices 🫶🏽 OSWIN HAS MY HEARTTTT I love his whole character and the dynamic you can build with him is beautiful. To be honest, I love all the LIs you’ve introduced so far. Zahn and Duri are everything to me as well. The customisation + branching is SO good. I’m so excited to see where this goes and I can’t believe I only just got around to reading it (it’s been in my library for  while!) I LOVE UR WORK‼️🫶🏽 thank u!! 

I did have a question: I know u have a form to report bugs etc, does this include typos you’d want readers to point out? I hope that doesn’t come across nit-picky x 

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Thank you, my friend! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I'm cooking up more and will have an update soon as well. You are welcome to report typos too in the error form, but you may be there all day, lol. Once chapter 5 is out (*cough, later this weekend I hope, cough*), all the chapters are getting a good old scrub for typos and such. Not a full re-work, just a polish. I figured out a system to help me find those pesky errors (I am dyslexic & ADHD, which makes editing a super-challenge), and I think I can make some good improvements with what I've worked out. So, I still welcome any help you want to provide, but please don't put yourself out either, my dear.  ^_^

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I hope this system works out well for u!! Pls don’t stress ab it!’  Tbh, I thought the narration and grammar flowed so well, it was only minor typos here and there x I can’t wait for the next chapter 😭🙏🏽 I’m so hooked already