Really great entry :) very intriguing atmosphere. You've managed to achieve a specific dark medieval fantasy vibe here that's really quite effective.
The thing that stood out to me the most was the pick-pocket minigame. I think that one in particular has the bones of something truly great with a bit of tweaking and some extra mechanics. Getting through it required a surprising amount of skill and understanding of the mechanics, even though it seems like a very basic concept from the outside. I think it could be a game in itself if you spent some time on it, and it would work with mobile too because you just need to drag your mouse around (although reading through the comments, sounds like you'd maybe have to dial back the difficulty a smidge ;) )
I also got the sense that there's more to this world than what we get to see in the game so I'd love to see it expanded!