I absolutely loved this game, and I hope you continue working on it!! There's a lot that worked for me here: like having the time to get to know Winter before making choices as her and the moment where it switches from short entries to the longer narrative. That first time I clicked "Continue" and more text filled the screen instead of clearing to the next one was really impactful. The twist is such a delightful "aHA!" moment that recontextualizes the entire thing <3