What a chilling and surreal game! I loved a lot of choices you made with this, both how you used Ink and your prose -- like the cycling choice of breathing in/out and how jarring it is to be given the option to braid someone's leg hair. I did notice a number of typos that took me out of the game a bit, in the future I recommend copying and pasting your Ink text into something like Grammarly just to catch as many errors as possible.