Oh cool, I would like to check it out immediately but as I just recently completed the old demo, I feel like I would skip too much to the new content and miss some stuff. But maybe I can gain enough focus to not do that. So check it out later.
Do as you like. The Twine version is being reworked bit by bit, so you'll get even more novelty when you read it. For the moment I've only rewritten the prologue and the beginning of the 1st chapter. And I can't remember where dashingdon's version ends but I think there's an addition of maybe 40k on Twine's version.