There's nothing much I can say that hasn't been said by Mentel. The game is literally all text, and it's not even a visual novel to justify it. The writing is awful, since most of the sad memories are just your family dying while you were being a jerk, which really doesn't connect me with the spirit or the story whatsoever, since the only time I heard of the family is through floaty black boxes I should avoid(You could add some kind of backstory in order to connect the player with the protagonist more). I'd suggest getting some better assets from the asset store to make the player connect with the game more, since the current game feels more like a prototype rather than a fully fledged game with 10 levels. The font the game was going with feels out of place, mainly because the game lacks meaningful graphics.