Oughhhhh this game is fantastic!!! It feels so complete too, even if there's CGs and other features to come in the future, I didn't feel like it was lacking in any way. The opening 'cutscene', the little cut-ins with the names of each chapter as well as the hand picking up the bullets, it all oozes so much style and it absolutely fucks.
The story itself is also so well done, one that could fill an entire book neatly told within just 30k words, it's just as long as it needs to be, it doesn't feel like it drags on at any point nor that it's missing something. It's just so well crafted from beginning to end, I'm really impressed.
Midnight is great. I'm particular to narratives about lone wolves like her taking in a 'client' and going on a mission with them to resolve both of their baggages. It's a tried archetype, but a good one. And you wrote it so well! Midnight and Marie's relationship easily carried the first half of the game, and then Midnight's bout at the end and her whole backstory and the whole ending were so bittersweet, I loved it.
Also your art and your expressions especially are great. The character's emotions could be felt, I specifically remember Midnight's goofy grin and Marie's annoyed face as two of my favorites.
You did an amazing job with this one, and I'd love to play it again once the complete version is released!