This was a cool piece to listen to! Not really in my wheelhouse, but I see the appeal!
I really like how you applied the rule-breaking component to this - I think it really helps keep the momentum going, and I enjoyed trying to count beats/tempos in the different sections. I also found that the contrast between the sections was really solid!
Some others have already mentioned some of the repetition with the higher pitched melody, and I would probably agree to an extent. I don't dislike the idea of repetition in some sections (as my submissions has quite a bit of that lol), but I think it could've helped if some of those sections were not stretched out quite as much as they were, IMO.
The section at ~ 3:35 was probably my personal favorite because it was such a nice contrast to the faster paced sections preceding it. I think I would've wanted the buildup to go right into this section instead of dropping down and building up again. Maybe that's a genre thing that I'm unaware of, but I think this would've been something I'd do to better introduce a contrasting section that's as cool as yours was, but also still maintain a level of repetition in the lead parts. Hopefully that makes sense!
Thanks for sharing, and keep up the great work :)