oh my goodness this gave me so many warm, fuzzy feelings <3 the ways mae and nyx interact, the atypical nature of their d/s relationship, the raw emotions they process, the pulse racing intimacy and kink play… their relationship is simply beautiful, and reading this made me weak in the knees at points. I’m definitely jealous of nyx’s position :3
I genuinely feel like this makes a great presentation for what I love about ABDL! it captures so much of the raw, emotional essence that I feel when I explore this kink… as well as the physical sensations and dynamics that make my heart flutter. this story makes me so happy!
in the start of the game, you said you’re curious about what led people to click the thumbnail and check it out. to be honest, I was browsing the ABDL tag (which I discovered from a kink game a friend shared with me) looking for something fun, and this was one of the more inviting entries I found. I was already considering making a new account to engage with this stuff more privately, and this story floored me so much I just had to register right away to gush about it!!
something else I want to touch on… normally, dubcon makes me anxious, but the way it’s handled here is actually comfortable? two reasons I can think of why that is are how vocal the girls are in navigating their relationship dynamic, and also the fact that it’s not written in second person which gives me some distance from the scene. on that note, I find the writing style for internal thoughts very interesting- it reminds me of describing actions when doing RP with others, which makes it a very cute effect here!
I’m definitely looking forward to anything you write next, whether it’s about these two still or other characters in this world, or something else entirely. there’s a lot of details hinted at about how different this society is from our own, and I’m curious to see where that leads wrt exploring this subject matter! but even if you don’t follow up that worldbuilding right away, the emotional strength of your writing has me hooked!