Thanks for your lovely comment! It’s interesting hearing your thoughts about why this story worked for you. I’m glad my portrayal of the kink resonated, and that you liked the relationship & atypical D/s dynamic between my lead characters!
I prrrobably shouldn’t say too much about the dub-con aspect since I enjoy death of the author… but! Dub-con tends to be kind of an anxious thing for me as well, which might be why I like it best with some sweetness. That can include things like mutual physical intimacy and copious talk about feelings (or being vocal in the dynamic as you put it!)… perhaps alongside some appropriate nervousness on the characters’ parts. Ultimately I think the feelings & interactions here are up to reader interpretation, but I’m glad you found my take on dub-con unusually comfortable, I will take it as a sign I’m doing something right!
Oh, and ty for pointing out the similarity to text RP! That’s like, at least unconsciously intentional I think… I’m glad it has a cute effect!
I hope you’ll find something to like in my next projects as well. Fingers crossed I’ll have something substantial uploaded soon(tm) from the next next game jams that have caught my eye, so feel very free to stay tuned!