I love and definitely hear the work you put into developing a narrative. There's either a reverb or pad throughout that sounds a pretty convolved when it comes in with the guitar strums. I actually find it very ambiguous and haunting cause it contrasts the piano part in a very neat and subtle way. If that wasn't really the goal though then I think that notching out some low-mids and reducing the decay a bit might add a lot of space for individual notes to ring out distinctly. Very pretty chords, melodies and musical changes make this a very easily enjoyable song!