Art's nice, though the presentation is a bit unpolished (the project's name is just "Novembear 2024" in a lot of places, and audio design is really sparse). Snow's Rest has got kind of a slow, inert opening featuring a lot of setup, but the conflicts don't really take shape yet. While starting a story with something more dramatically active is recommended in general, in this state the game doesn't give the reader anything to latch onto.