Loved the "new" chapters. Salyra hate was excellent. Only little issue i had was the scene where Rana is hiding from the bullies, i would have loved a way to simply leave without interacting, but that's just a minor issue.
Also few minor issues i found:
"Cotten" should be "cotton", unless it's a material i haven't heard about.
Save: https://gofile.io/d/uLagbk
Dena got wrong prounoun
save: https://gofile.io/d/sConi7
I think there is a word missing here