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I think someone played Subnautica when writing this chapter :D. Just give me thos feels.

Edit: Just finished, love it so far, can't wait for more.

Also i have a question. If i choose not to take healing potion when attempting to speak, does it lock into mute mc or can i try again some time later?

Love this! Also found another bug.

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Save:
https://gofile.io/d/8V6DG2

Missing letter


Save:
https://gofile.io/d/RX1YNc

Found a broken variable

Save:
https://gofile.io/d/XFC4ju

Just finished the chapter. 

From brief interaction with Kestrel, gotta say they seem fun :D.

Can't wait for more.

Fresh playthrough started today

Broken variable.


Save:
https://gofile.io/d/DMEKSt

Wrong name 

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/aLE9cL

Broken variable

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/mSfJlH

Didn't drink the wine

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/gIdCeG

Then? Wrong word?

Save:

https://gofile.io/d/cauiLu

Love the chapter. Flirting with Nisa is fun, can't wait to see how it will blow up in MC face :D

Never mind about the buttons, Dark reader add-on broke them.

Very nice start, was a good read.

Few issues tho:

Imported save data from previous game

Save:https://gofile.io/uploadFiles

Icons seem to be broken

Misspelled word in Adas codex entry

Error in Enids codex entry

And last and most important issue:

FUCK YOU ITCH FOR NOT NOTIFYING ME THAT THIS UPDATED!

👍

No worries, just making a joke :D

For some reason i have this nagging feeling that i should start a new playthrough :D

Error if you try to change pronouns :

Take your time. As much as i personally want to play this, your health and personal life takes priority!

Loving the chapter 2 so far, but found this broken variable. Also chose not to have a nickname.

This is a fresh playtrough started just few hours ago.

Save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/9VHGTCbr

Missing space:

Found a broken variable

save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/GgmQev3T

Look ma, I'm famous!

Glad i could help!

Liked the first chapter. Good start. Like the dynamic between characters and can't wait to see how it will work as the story goes on.

Wrong pronoun

Save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/kzQ1dc7G

One more thing, isn't it supposed to be Moriarty?

Found a broken variable, i used a save from previous version if that matters.

Save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/guLCnaKh
P.S.
Should i keep adding save likes this? Always worried that pixeldrain looks slightly suspicious.

Maybe try and see how Superstition did it? Ask the dev maybe? She managed to have some sort of save export at the end of seasons.

Bit of a technical question, finished the act 1 few days ago and just wanted to know how will the save/choice transfer happen?

A new character creation and then pick what happened in act 1 or some sort of save transfer?

Mostly just want to know if i should keep save from the ending or i shouldn't worry about that.

If twine is anything like other html things, try checking css file, appearance related things are usually there.

Overall nice start, will be waiting for more. Always liked the "what is this human mannerism" joke when dealing/ playing inhuman character.

Few thing i noticed tho.

Wrong/different surname from what i entered, same as the Charlies friend

save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/1Y1V2onA

Also you should probably edit the darkmode theme a bit

Error i got

save:

https://pixeldrain.com/u/ZUFZ7JkA

Another one

Game breaking issue

Save
https://pixeldrain.com/u/aLLARU77

Just a minor spelling error

Wrong pronoun

Found sort of repeating bit of text or is it supposed be that way?

You probably should take look at this variable. doesn't really fit in to the sentence "her" would work better. 

save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/MH2SvPwE

List of pronouns set just for sake of information:

Should be "has returned"

I think only one of the replies should be here

"What MC says is true." :D

You should probably add a neutral line here: 

Missing first letter

MC again 

First of all just finished? the new chapter and cliffhangers like that should be illegal you bastard (っ °Д °;)っ!

But yeah, like the new chapter, can't wait for Fae shenanigans to start :D

A broken variable?(is that what you call it) :

I loaded a save from previous version if that matters

save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/CkqbDUGx

Also few variables in the Info screen

Also you might want to shorten the fade in timer for those lines near the end, i though i reached the end for a while.

Hi, i like like what already here.

Just wanted a bit of clarification how buying this works.

Is it purchase once and get stuff x amount of time after patrons or pay every few updates?

I think just changing the link color to something more contrasting would work.

Here's example from Bastards of Camelot. Stands out just nice on similar'ish background

Hi, just started reading.

Maybe it's just my problem, but links are hard to see when playing in dark mode.

Blue on gray just kinda blend together.

Caught a bug

save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/CwRNASWq

Nice update. Liked Rowan introduction. Also i'm a sucker for pet names so that is nice too!

All the pronouns are wrong.

Chose "woman" in the dream sequence.

https://pixeldrain.com/u/6qajGbgy

More pronoun issues? or is it supposed be like that?

https://pixeldrain.com/u/siviorGc

Well that was for lack of a better word sad.  Still a good read!

Just to double check part 3 is the lat one ? Or am i doing something wrong?

Overall i like this, and can't wait for more.

Just one complaint, make links(hair length etc) different color from text.

I guess i reached the end, but in case it's a bug still gonna post it

save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/GKmdpiBT

also still says chapter 2 in chapter 3

another bug

save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/7oudhSHk

repeating paragraph:
save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/4JhRzEHW

Just finished, great game. Can't wait to read some more.

MC childhood is adorable if a bit horrifying in some spots. Parents are actually nice if with some eccentricities when it come to the father. Gramps is a beast. Kalya is adorable as a best friend and it's fun seeing relationship grow.

One more thing:

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And another

Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>></if>
<<if $pondprankalya == "1">>…

It's is when selecting to watch the sky with Kalya and "Get closer to her" at the lake with funny name

Sorry it's hard to explain the location in story 

save

https://pixeldrain.com/u/P6thL1BU

Few errors after being "kidnapped" and pressing "The elemental has a question"

Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>></if>
<<if $element == "earth">>…
and
Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>> 
 <<if $element="=" "air"="">>…</if></if>

also there is a broken </div> right by the button

save

https://pixeldrain.com/u/mkKD9Zrg

Yes, it's the baby bit.

Strange word i used last time works now, but after trying few random ones found a word "speak" both capitalized and not trigger it.

Also space both in front and after any? word trigger it

I think it's because rolled back and tried another word, initial word works after rollback but no other does

here's a save

https://pixeldrain.com/u/ypxhpkbA

The word used was "Yes"

Interesting read. Well done.

Not sure if it's been reported or even if it's a bug, but if you pick "...you do not worship any deity and you never will." you get the same result as "...you believe in the Ancient Ones, but your belief also extends to the worship of Solus."   

Itch wont let me paste screenshot for some reason , sorry

Here's a link to it https://imgur.com/QreUSuE

Save file

https://www.mediafire.com/file/jke76kcy0ynj3ou/crown-of-exile-20230524-234259.sa...