Good point:
-Interesting art. I really liked it. I prefer Nancy, even if I wouldn't want her to give me a chin hit XD. I'm kidding. The decors are good too. The graphic identity is nice.
-The sound is well adapted to the scenes. I was carried into the game directly.
-The Kink part is honest. If I'm not mistaken it's the 3rd game that is honest with the "ADULT" side of Kink and that doesn't use it for any pretext. I still have to test one last one before confirming. 2nd game that I see with assumed "ready to burst". But the level of the different games that do it goes in your favor. (but that's just my point of view).
-The story is nice. And the characters are endearing.
???? - I would have seen more images and phases, especially with one person drawing per character. But I don't know the difficulties you encountered in your development so I prefer not to put it in a point to review.
Point to review:
- Bugs but you have already noted them. Except maybe the one that directly launches chapter 2 when you reload an empty save slot.
- The game is flat in its general mechanics. The gameplay of the constellations is nice. But I would have expected a little more interaction. I did not feel a real direction in the story choices. I did not try everything I just looked at the occurrences between chapters 1 and 3. So with regard to the story I am ready to try again to withdraw what I said and to apologize if necessary. But otherwise apart from discussions and a mini game it is quite poor.
Final note: Very good games and very enjoyable if you just want to chill without worrying or replacing a small book. The characters are very endearing and I find that in a certain way Nancy embodies a message that I find missing in the Jam, it is the fact of accepting who she is with her pleasures, as "abnormal" as it may be. I think I have only seen this message twice and I find that it is something that is generally missing. For that reason this story is part of those that have the most interest (even if it is during a rather heated moment. But what a pain there is to combine business with pleasure :3). There is no excuse to appreciate that this belly is filled with food or inflated with a pump. Thank you for this honesty!!! However I remain on my end on the gameplay which sadly remains a little limited.
This does not reduce the work that you had to provide to create this game. I had a very good time playing it, and from what I read I am not the only one. The goal of a game is not to please its creators, but to satisfy its players. Your game deserves all the credit.
Thank you for your work and for the good time you made us spend. and I hope to be able to find your work in the future. ^^