Cool, I can help you with that. I can also make sure that it sounds "native" in english without changing the meaning of what you want to say/keeping the individual personalities of the characters. Do you have a way for me to reach you? I won't mind adjust a script as I've done this for several other devs as well, I can also just send you corrections
Edit: I found you, I just have to wait for you to send me a friend request on discord