Hi, I asked about this before but its been a few months. I loath patreon, don't want to support them at all (seriously hate their censorship). Is any of the older "patreon exclusive" stuff available in the public update here? Rather than patreon or steam (only because you can't play the game yet), is there a way to give you money through here for the full version? I'll pay whatever you're expecting the full version price to be to get "full access" to the game.
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Course of Temptation November Update (v0.5.5) comments · Posted in Course of Temptation November Update (v0.5.5) comments
Thank you for the update o/ Someone helped find out that the "extreme punishments" in the arcade are impossible to trigger. Apparently you CANNOT get anyone to roll over the bet 3 times to take a "huge punishment". Not sure if this is just an error or was intentional to hide content away, but would sure like to see the arcade extreme punishments/3rd strike penalties.
So there is a difference in content between patreon and public, which is fine and all, but are you going to make a paid version on here so people can access the patreon content without joining patreon? Cus I'm seriously against patreon. I am happy to pay for a game, but not if it means I'm getting cut content
Yeah, I guess I can't support this after all. This community is super hostile against people who like femdom, good luck with your game, but its absolutely pointless trying to cater to two groups, especially when one is very much in the minority. (Also to all the haters, how is it *I* am the submissive one, but somehow the "Alpha" guys are the whiniest bitches?)
1) you have several typos and errors in your text
2) playing the sub route, after the getting to the free roam, as soon as I got the call from work I got several errors (I tried to ignore them, but it ultimately went back to title)
3) I'm going to assume over time there is going to be more appropriate sprites to reflect whats happening (i.e. you are actually half naked when you are woken up) which also leads into appropriate CGs, like actually having the MC kneeling on the floor after being kicked, Clarissa actually hugging Darian, etc. (the big sister in the towel was really good though)
4) Are we actually going to get real cuck content? Cus that'd be really hot if your big sister and her boyfriend actively cuck you with you directly watching and/or involving other things
5) Is there really no plans to make Billy the top at all?
I don't want this to all sound negative, so here is some positive things as well:
1) The art is pretty good and likable
2) The "bitch" mood of the girls and the "doormat" of the MC are conveyed well and not in bad way that sometimes happens with games like this (when you're into femdom). Normally, I am not a fan of abuse that gets labeled femdom, but this actually feels rather appropriate and can see a lot of potential for really fun stuff moving forward, especially with the "scent" option in the beginning
3) While you had a lot of typos, your dialogue and interactions are done well. It's not a really bad MTL quality of "English" and that's actually something
4) Your responsiveness and communication is a good sign, and gives positive impressions for the game (especially if you fix aforementioned bugs soon instead of "next release)
Some questions:
1) How far are kinks going to go? Like I was interested in the idea of cucking and if billy can top, that means I'd also like pegging. Scent play, besides sweat also makes me wonder about watersports. Linda seems like she'd be really into doing figging, so that along with other spanking content is hot. Any of these on the menu at all or even considerations?
2) Do you actually have the story planned out and know how its going to end? I am not asking for you to tell me, I just want to make sure you're not going with the intention of "winging it" and finding you can't continue because you hit a wall when the sex isn't enough to carry the story.
3) What do you think your release schedule will be like for this game?
4)Game crashed right at the free roam start, so that's...not a good sign. Is there going to be more to choices down the road? Like you picked "submissive" or "dominate" in the very beginning and then got one choice to hop over if you have regret. Is there going to be more choices down the road or is this going to be like "Do you want to see scene A or B?" or "Do you want to opt out of X content?" ?
I guess that's all my thoughts for now. I wish you luck, the game is too short at the moment and having some detrimental bugs means I can't give a proper evaluation, but I am interested in watching this project and seeing how it develops in the next few stages. I think this is something I might want to support, but I'd have to see how a few updates go before I want to commit to anything.
Chapter 2 is done and available!!! comments · Replied to NSN in Chapter 2 is done and available!!! comments
Chapter 2 is done and available!!! comments · Replied to NSN in Chapter 2 is done and available!!! comments
btw, towards the end of the first chapter I guess...when you and your wife are doing the survey together, there is a typo in some of the questions (breats), also afterwards there is an image failure (sink24 I think?) and also from this point on, you put in "jo" for the wife's name, regardless of what the player wrote. Its happening a bit.
btw, since I got this far playing it, I'm kinda disappointed, cus I absolutely would 100% want to clean her up (earlier in the game, it was a "some time" thing, but I'm absolutely wanting to go down on her whenever and full of whatever :P)
That said, I understand now precisely why you got overwhelmed. You have a loooot of excessive choices here that are gonna be hell to track, so I can see adding the player cleaning her up and eating her out is a no go :P Just thought I'd mention it though while reporting bugs
Firstly, congrats on learning and overcoming obstacles o/ I think most new devs discover that whole "being overly ambitious" issue; people don't realize until they are doing it, but a simple choice doesn't grow additively, it grows exponentially and can get out of control real fast the more elements you add.
This is me jumping the gun a bit, but is your game going to have options for cuckolding? I personally would like to see some femdom/light humiliation, but I also know that's not in a lot of people's wheelhouse. That said, I thought it might not hurt to ask.
good luck with your game regardless, if you can, try discussing other devs some tips and tricks, many are more than willing to share some neat info.
What if I'm a more free spirited person? (also is nymphomania version limited to subscribers/patreon?) By "free spirited" I actually like watching the other girls do others, or rather, I think if I am gonna sleep around and stuff, why can't they? I mean some actual cuckcolding scenes would be pretty hot, but it sounds like that's only for game overs (hate that btw, it sucks when content you want to see is tied behind a game over, which frequently happens to femdom as well).
Can you just...you know, be chill with the love interests doing their own thing to whatever degree you're just letting them be free? I mean if I didn't want them to sleep around, I'd be taking care of them myself, just saying...
So where is the line? Do we not find fart jokes funny anymore? Fat jokes? Blonde jokes? Burnette jokes? Red head jokes? Religious jokes? Bully jokes? Work jokes?
The whole "its fine to laugh until someone makes fun of something I relate to" stance is just bad. Some jokes fall flat or are in bad taste, but getting overly hung up on them is kinda a huge reason why a lot of things suck these days. If you can't laugh and make fun of the shit you deal with, your life is gonna get depressing real quick.
I'm seriously torn. I love this content and how hard the fetishes and kinks go for the most part, but man the MC. On the one hand, I get it, I truly do. If he was hot/likable, people would want to do more sexy stuff with him and it makes it hard to justify some of the narrative. On the other hand, the MC as is, is just so incredibly dislikable. Like it really annoys me to play as him, and so trying to remove myself from him as a character seems like the ideal, but that just makes it even more obnoxious with some of the things he does.
Please don't misunderstand, its not like bad writing or anything. Actually, I've often said being able to bring about negative emotions in the reader is a sign of good writing, because it means they are engaged and having a reaction to what's happening in the story. But my god, the MC not only has a face I just want to punch, he's just...such a douche. It's not even unrealistic, his reactions are appropriate for his situation for the most part, it just rubs me the wrong way as a submissive guy in general.
The kinks are hot, I am enjoying the semi-political social community of what the island turned nation. And if the MC was hot, there would be less reasons to abuse him and his wife would get an even more raw end of the deal. Like I said, I'm just torn.
I basically boycott patreon, so I can't really message there.
For merch, I'd absolutely wear a shirt with a broken collar that says "Spending time in church broke my rebellion"
or perhaps a picture of some phallic shaped thing with angel wings or something to make it look kinda not-intentional and something like "True prayer begins by being on your knees"
Although if you want to have stuff less linked to the religious stuff which can be a headache all on its own, there is also:
Gym themed:
"Squats is my source of protein"
"Exercising taught me how to breath through my nose"
Casual:
"Why do people keep asking if my Landlady is my mom?"
*picture of a collar* "Looking for adoption"
Playing the new update, will edit this as I find things; I started the peter route. When I tried to leave, if you don't click the "z/enter/confirm/etc." button just where the door is, it lets you keep walking and you can walk on top of walls/on things you shouldn't; I can't seem to add a screenshot atm.
After using the school toilet (on the left) I did "poo" and now the screen is very dim. It seems this has bugged me and I can't activate other events. I reloaded, tried pee, same thing. It makes everything dim. I don't know what locker you want people to try/go to, but the ones by the classroom don't do anything and the other set of lockers is blocked by that blue haired girl that can't be gotten through. Also there is a girl with a sword that seems out of place on the right side of the school entrance, she giggles then turns her back on you and can no longer be interacted with. Not sure if that's intended or not. I talked to most the NPCs I think (not sure if I missed any, didn't see any typos) It's a nice setting so far, there is a few interaction issues that need to be addressed (mainly having to press z/confirm when leaving your house; should be an event to automatically move you to the town map instead of pressing). I think that's all I found for now.
I don't want this to be a negative review or seem like it, I just wanted to point out bugs and stuff I found, but the game looks beautiful and the sprites are nice. I like how the town looks; The school is overly simple atm, can understand why. I still hope we can rename characters at some point XD
As far as the preview scenes go, I suuuuper like the idea of a maid/assistant that is supposedly your "employee" going into a role where they wind up being the boss/disciplinarian and things of that nature. Thanks again, really looking forward to this project. You added quite a lot since v1!
That sounds good! Although if I might make a suggestion since you're so early, have you considered allowing players to name the characters themselves? It can be a bit of a pain when you get used to fast typing dialogue for specific name, but this would definitely be more immersive on the player side and is usually something appreciated vs being forced into a name that removes the player's will
Well...This was very short. I like the themes, so that's not a problem to me. However there is a few things even in the demo I want to talk about/address:
1) the first bit about the verifying age is a bit ambiguous of what you're trying to do. Given your target audience, its a bit understandable some people might mistake how that "option" works, instead of a standard yes/no
2) the preview scenarios look intriguing, but it doesn't actually tell me anything about where you want this game to go. Are those possible story lines, are they where you will wind up, is that NPCs we're going to interact with?
3) Going into the male part, there is zero content, and you start with a female sprite to begin with. Does that mean there is no male option and its probably on the back burner? Is that content going to be something that lags due to your lack of interest in it? You mentioned its your first time allowing a choice in gender. That's a bit of a yellow flag for me, because anytime a dev tries to branch out to appease an audience, I find in my experience they burn out faster and lose motivation for the project altogether.
Works for me; I am one of those "good boy" submissives, I generally do what I'm told and that just makes me boring. It also makes for very boring game plays, since I can't really bring myself to misbehave to get punished, likewise its doubly hard to just be an asshole to see scenes too. I realize that's a "me" problem, but like...in general I don't think submissives like saying really asshole stuff. They can act out for punishment or be playful, but going up to teacher first day and calling her class "BS" is not the way :S
Example:
MC could've shown he was eager and happy with the class and the professor could be proud and happy of his willingness, and would ask if she could use his help to be an "example" in class, which could lead to the spankings and everything else just as easily as him being punished for being an asshole. Being someone that has been bullied and stuff would lend credibility to being a pushover, but them praising him and kind of messing with telling him how good he is/whatever, will make him accept what they do to him while messing with him.
Really looking forward to this, hope you keep this up.
Edit: After finishing the demo, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't make the MC an asshole to have to require scenes. There is ways to make an example of them without having to resort to making them basically an unlikable asshole to open up scenes. He was bullied his whole life apparently, if anyone would want to buy into the "koolaid" here, its him. Having him willing and eager to do things and where some spite/overzealousness and/or just enjoying to mess with him should open several doors without having to resort to "This is fucking lame and you're stupid for this" type of setup
have you considered...NOT opening that path then? you literally don't have to unlock everything. Just don't do it. The "progress" you're mentioning is for the futa quests, why would you be on those if you don't like that content? To put it to you clearly, if you go to a buffet and they have fish there, do you feel obligated to take it just because its available?
Yeah, I noticed that a bit too...Rather than quest updates/expansions, I think the current things in the game need to be touched up. Balances for resources, animations that should be changed for travel, some aspects that have been around for ages (such as box, keys, also all the other rooms. How am I having full upgrades but there is really nothing being done with the farm? I feel like that should fix quite a few issues and have been developed. Sports room is awfully bare all the time for all the athletes around)
Okay, that makes sense, but again...I want to point out, I *do* have everything maxed out. If having everything maxed out makes you have a net loss, something is wrong there, don't you think? I have an idea what you want to point out, I have those events too, but I'm still burning through obscene amounts of water. Dirty water isn't cleaning nearly as fast and I can't seem to generate enough water for everyone. If its really my greenhouse consuming a huge portion of water, again...I want to impress there is a balance issue there. If this were a legit sim game or resource management game, I'd be like okay...but this is first and foremost a porn game. If you really want to focus on the resource management side of it, then maybe make that the main selling point or keep the difficulty as it is at the moment as a "challenge" option, but do fix up the rest.
Can you please make more systems available to support your base without resorting to cheating? Highest tier in everything, I don't have all the people, and while food isn't a problem, water sucks. At least let it hold/produce more water per day? as it stands, I can have food to spare at second to highest food setting, but water? I'm one up from no water, and its still tanking way too fast.