Thats was creepy... It finishes when it says "it won't happen again". Is it supposed to be this way? . . To be honest I didn't understand whats going on) But it was scary. Hope to see how plot twists
Thanks! I'm not entirely sure of the story right now either, so I'm glad the creepiness came across well. That's really what I was focusing on. And there should have been one more scene after "it won't happen again." Was your character still visible where it ended?