I enjoyed this update. Here's some feedback:
Pros: Some good Character development for some of the girls that haven't been getting much attention. I especially liked Esthers scene with Colby, she forced him onto his backfoot easily. I think some of the girls need to be nicer to Cecilia though, she's trying to help and they are dissing her hard.
Cons: There aren't many choices to make in this update. Just the lewd with Fiona. Also not much difference in regards to my choices leading up to this point, meaning that in one of my games I have rejected all romantic advances from all the girls but I only saw one or two lines regarding that choice.
What I would like to see: Choices should have consequences. In my non-harem/Fiona only game I would like to see growing division and discontent. Sue should be getting more desperate for approval, Tracy more dejected at being rejected, etc.
I know these things take more work, its just my two cents.