Sorry, but I couldn't manage to get across the first screen. It took me several times each time to just get on the first platform. When I finally got my character on it, then my character often kept on jumping and I missed the next platform. When I reached the next platform successfully, then I always fell off while trying to jump towards the next. I tried for a couple minutes and then gave up.
A shame, because it seems you have a couple good things in the game.