i think the story is pretty good. there are a few things i think you should change. the first is making it so clicking the "buy" text on the item lets you buy it. next is that clicking "follow" on the sharespace page gives you a notification that you're following it. also changing the sharespace feed so it shows the most recent photo at the top and the oldest at the bottom. other than that i just don like how there is an option to work and get money and not work and for all intents and purposes it looks like its just a choice of either getting money or not getting money.