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only thing i dislike is that the character with pubic hair like immediately gets it hidden and then her position/s also effectively hides it. the idea is pretty neat and i like the emergency broadcast recordings. also would be nice if the movement in factory was directly controlled by the keys instead of highlighting the key and then needing to hit enter to submit the movement command. also maybe changing the wasd to arrows. i took screenshots and was wondering why wasd isn working. im looking forward to being able to more freely explore around in the future. 

i think the story is pretty good. there are a few things i think you should change. the first is making it so clicking the "buy" text on the item lets you buy it. next is that clicking "follow" on the sharespace page gives you a notification that you're following it. also changing the sharespace feed so it shows the most recent photo at the top and the oldest at the bottom. other than that i just don like how there is an option to work and get money and not work and for all intents and purposes it looks like its just a choice of either getting money or not getting money.

pretty nice. only thing that sucks is the random chance stuff resulting in game overs. and the only reason it sucks is because of having to redo everything to once more come to the random chance again.

pretty nice story so far. soft lock loop being gone is nice too

pretty good, i think you should increase the default voice volume a little bit.

pretty decent ai and a really pretty girl. how does the intimacy level go up?

she's great, i should get her a ring -u-

 pretty good, only thing i didn't like is when i played the maze part where you dont have a choice but still have to select the choice to look. it kind of ruins the feeling of not seeing what is happening. also i realized the trick but had to walk into it because of the single option which felt bad. and then when you're congratulated for not peeking at the end it feels even worse. other than that, one of the best games i've played.

art and general story are pretty good. 

i would change the current route a little so he catches his wife because it feels like the husband is too dense. whether that results in continued ntr or not or nts/etc. like all the things that happen just stack up too much. the make-up she was wearing matches the cosplay photo. his wife refuses to be in the same room as her friend's girlfriend. she gives a wrong address going the complete wrong way. girlfriend wears mask despite being fine without it as shown from cosplay photo. looks and sounds like his wife. while going home gets a message from his wife ( she shouldn know he's going home) and that coincidently makes him get home later. showered twice. experience with putting together cosplays and doesn know what a temporary tattoo is. there's also how she went to cosplay for her friend multiple times.

 an option to be suspicious and pretend to "not see" the text message and catch her or remove that second text message and have her ask him to pick up the stuff while coming home before he leaves that morning would feel better because otherwise he just feels too stupid. too many points of suspicion such that it feels wrong.

pretty fun game. only thing i would change is making the "let's escape" option one where they help each other making it easier to escape/get out.

i think you did pretty well. there are some parts lacking a little but i still liked it. i look forward to the next story you wan to tell

pretty good. i think you should change the size of the choice bubbles (smaller) so it's easier to spam back through and search for different routes

how common are/is the blackmail?

pretty good, i think you should change the branching choices a bit(ntr,nts). i think you should change it because the options are both the truth and a lie. for "truth", its true you aren dating at that exact moment but right after you are intending  to accept the confession and start dating so its like lying by omission. with "lie" while you aren dating at that exact moment kana confessed to you with the intention of wanting to date so whether you are dating or not depends upon jack's response. so saying they are already dating isn technically a lie since he is intending to say yes.